Saturday, August 1, 2009
John
"You are very brave"
hangs there
You say it again,
knowing the doubtable things
need saying twice,
and add my name.
they hang there
"Okay"
I whisper.
I shrug.
You lift
eyebrows
and nod.
When I pass through the door
the "brave" floats overhead,
it squishes into my car
and bumps against the roof.
It tags along into my home
and is connected detached,
like my sleeping dog,
but rather shapeless.
There, though.
A gift, to open when I believe.
It will be cherished.
Thank you.
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7 comments:
That is wonderful! I have lots of "hangs there" that I need to keep close by and open whenever....
Funny.... this was posted on my anniversary... my husband's name is John. :)
What a special gift! And I love how you turn this into poetry, also a gift. One that you've given. A brave poet. That's what I see.
"bumps along the roof" ,
love that
and the picture is breathtaking
kind of nice to have a brave along.
brave is a beautiful like that
your words are taking on forms that you have not yet explored before.
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