Thursday, May 14, 2009

The rain sizzles
and whispers
and taps it's whispy fingers
all over my window.
It draws a breath
and sighs,
(the sky)
my eyelash sweeps the pillow.

5 comments:

corine said...

I adored your comment on la porte rouge.

kendalee said...

It draws a breath
and sighs,
(the sky)
my eyelash sweeps the pillow.

It's beautiful in its entirety but those words just sing to me!

And hear, hear to Corine's comment. LOVED your response to the troll.

Beverly Ash Gilbert said...

mmm - I love falling asleep to the sound of rain on the window...

Claire said...

you continue amazing me. your words feed me sheila. thank you so much.

♥ bfs~"Mimi" ♥ said...

I absolutely love this!!